Thought Bubbles
Monday 

Today has been one disaster after another! For starters, the bus was late again so I thought I was going to get the sack. Then as I was waiting someone was hit by a car! Then there was chaos! Cars were all stopping, building up in the road, everyone was shouting and blaming others and the girl was motionless in the road. Some guy in a tracksuit went into the road followed by a man in a bright tie that took over and got everyone to stand back. I went to try and help. Before I knew it an ambulance and police were on the scene. None of us could see what was going on but it seemed like it went on for ages, then eventually when someone did come out a policeman just simply asked for our details and refused to tell anyone anything. After what seemed like a long wait the girl was put on a stretcher and put in the ambulance, it disappeared in seconds. The police didn’t stay for long and the traffic started to move again. It was just the six of us that saw it all happen. As I started to leave, some posh looking boy accused the sporty looking guy that went into the road of pushing her. Next thing there was a full-on fight! I didn’t stop to interfere as I had to get to work. I was already half an hour late and it didn’t look like the bus was coming anytime soon.

Saturday 

I went out with my mates last night. Just a bit of fun, getting high and having a laugh, just the usual. Somehow we got on to the subject of the accident. I don’t know why, but I mentioned what had happened and the people there. They didn’t really seem to care until I mentioned the posh boy that had the fight. Then they started asking loads of questions, but I didn’t think anything of it. Anyway, we carried on having fun and I didn’t leave until about 3am. Just before I left, they all got back on the subject of the posh boy. They said they want me to invite him out with us but I don’t think he would want to. When I said that, they got a bit nasty and insisted that I persuade him to come out with us or I’d be sorry.

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Gemma
03:36pm
18 Oct '06
I wrote this!!!!!!!!!!!!
amara
04:08pm
18 Oct '06
realy good
lauren
06:46pm
20 Oct '06
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Sarah
07:11pm
20 Oct '06
This piece is good it moves smoothly with the events and grabs the audience with the opening sentence great piece!
kayleigh
09:47pm
21 Oct '06
jermaine has to be my favourite character because i am one of his writers. i think this is a reallygood thing to be involved in, so if anyone is thinking of getting involved, do it! its great fun and youget to meet some really nice people!
margy
09:13am
23 Oct '06
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Daryl
09:58am
30 Oct '06
I spent all of my ICT lesson reading your work. Well done great work.
Daryl
10:00am
30 Oct '06
i did not write that last comment it was miss dewitt
kayleigh
03:31pm
01 Nov '06
go daryL! for logging on
angie
03:34pm
01 Nov '06
nicky is better but park ruless lolg go us !!!!